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Re: Music Room
I'm happy you wrote about music. I am a trumpet player, so I can definitely relate. I love the part leading up to the climax. Good job.
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Sunny Day
Guys! This was just a JOKE! Not a Real Poem!
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Chaos
I love this. I love the repetition and internal rhyme.
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Him
Thank you for your feedback. My poem "It's Over" is reality. Umm I wrote that to my ex-boyfriend to break up with him and all of it was true. I ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
awww. I like this one too! Although I'm not so sure what leers means but still........good job. I like your poems. You make me feel like a wanna be. haha
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: If Life is But a Dream
Wow! It seems like every poem I look at randomly, appears to be written by you. I love your poems!!! I would actually like to have a book of poems ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Winter Dust
I like it. I like the variety of large words. I like an expanded vocabulary. Snowflakes are such a wonderful thing to write about
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: A Monster, A Feind...
Hi. I like your poem. It's not the kind of poem that I'm used to.
Dec 14, 2008